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Post by Pez on Nov 8, 2008 17:52:01 GMT -6
Stop. Think. Think hard About this, About you and me, About the way we used to be. What we had you threw away; Unrecoverable. Words, at one time true, are now not. What once was enamor Once was there No more. Quiet. Go.
(Name how the structure of the poem came to be, win a prize!)
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Post by EmberRoze on Nov 8, 2008 18:01:51 GMT -6
I enjoyed this a lot. It's well written. The structure does baffle me, however, so no prize to be given away yet!
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Post by Aphtyn on Nov 8, 2008 18:25:54 GMT -6
Hmmm.... Structure boggles my mind. Do I get a prize if I point out the typo? It's irrevocable, not unrevocable... Prize?
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Post by Pez on Nov 8, 2008 18:39:58 GMT -6
Unrecoverable? And a quick Google could easily net you people a cookie
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Post by Aphtyn on Nov 8, 2008 18:45:14 GMT -6
Fibonacci!
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Post by Pez on Nov 9, 2008 0:20:20 GMT -6
I had to basically tell you
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Post by EmberRoze on Nov 9, 2008 0:49:04 GMT -6
Nuh-uh! You just told me to google it!
PS this is Aphtyn...
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