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Post by Aphtyn on Jan 18, 2009 23:14:27 GMT -6
Close your eyes and taste my heart beat. Cover your ears and feel my scent.
Do not touch and smell my passion. Plug your nose and hear my skin.
Senses fail; emotion takes hold. Reason falls when lights go out.
Infatuation dulls not the senses. Romance simply melds them.
Emotion takes all feeling. Blending until all is felt, heard, touched.
Tasted. And smelled.
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Love is a feeling of both emotion and physical contact. However, emotion can twist the mind to believe that impossible things (ie, smelling your lover's touch), happen.
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Post by Pez on Jan 29, 2009 21:14:48 GMT -6
Ehhh, couplets seem a bit awkward the way they're set up. Bold as always, however.
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Post by EmberRoze on Jan 29, 2009 21:29:45 GMT -6
Different style, as usual. I'm still adjusting, but it's good.
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Post by basiadulces on Mar 7, 2009 17:41:13 GMT -6
lovely(: i like it
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